Oblique Screenwriting Strategies 2006-12-09T23:46:37Z tag:www.cnewton.com,2025:/oss//7 Movable Type Copyright (c) 2005, cmcn #2 2006-12-09T23:46:37Z 2005-04-11T07:53:06Z tag:www.cnewton.com,2005:/oss//7.457 2005-04-11T07:53:06Z Put it on the nose and see how it reads.... cmcn http://www.nicknoltediary.com cmcn@nicknoltediary.com Put it on the nose and see how it reads. #1 2006-12-09T23:46:51Z 2005-04-11T07:48:34Z tag:www.cnewton.com,2005:/oss//7.456 2005-04-11T07:48:34Z Try reversing the opening lines of the scene.... cmcn http://www.nicknoltediary.com cmcn@nicknoltediary.com Try reversing the opening lines of the scene.