April 11, 2005
#2
Put it on the nose and see how it reads.Posted by cmcn at 12:53 AM | Comments (0)
#1
Try reversing the opening lines of the scene.Posted by cmcn at 12:48 AM | Comments (1)
Posted by cmcn at 12:53 AM | Comments (0)
Posted by cmcn at 12:48 AM | Comments (1)